Smoking

[Bunx]

I always enjoy poems and myths where Jesus is the main character. I feel as if you're saying Jesus is going to say you from cigarettes, which is nice. or Jesus is going to destroy the concept of marijuana, also hopeful. Or that the subject of the poem smokes cigs and it is ok because Jesus cures leapers, which is religiously correct.

I also love that pot is a subject in the poem. It feels as if the poem is talking about an unspeakable taboo or crime, but then you compare it is to death, Jesus and cigs. Hm i like this poem because it is confusing. please expand on your ideas so i can get a clearer message about marijuana!
tanks!

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jd, thanks for all your postive feedback on my poems. id say maybe add more to make this poems true theme stand out. I feel like this poem is about forgiveness