Smoking

[Ghassan]

I smoke the last cigarette
It fills me with satisfaction
At least I don't have terrets
My lungs are filled with emaciation

Maybe I should quit smoking
It would be healthier wouldn't it?
At least im not toking
And not blazing a bit

Jesus is the answer
Why does he force me to smoke
Like I'm a leper
With no hope

Maybe god will save me
probably not
He wants me to smoking the nicotine tree
But not pot

So I smoke my life away
And there is no stopping it
I look at my ash tray
and find it a despairing pit

Im new to this forum.. but since it is a collaborative effort I would like to state my opinion about your text...

I really can grasp the general meaning and intention behind it and I think I know where you are going with it... In the part where you start using Jesus, I would suggest you swap some few words that can enhance the aesthetic or musical properties of this poem...
by the way I really think toking is better that smoking