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07-26-2013, 01:28 PM
(07-26-2013, 01:02 PM)billy Wrote: the last line is pretty damn good actually. it is an almost perfect line in relation to the poem in two syllables, and shows that 575 is a guide.Thanks so much, billy  5-7-5 is indeed just a guide. It's pure coincidence if I end up with a 5-7-5 poem; mostly they're shorter I think. Thanks again. Best, Louise |
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RE: Haiku (?) - by rowens - 07-26-2013, 03:17 AM
RE: Haiku/Senryu - by Volaticus - 07-26-2013, 09:34 AM
RE: Haiku (?) - by Magpie - 07-26-2013, 07:33 AM
RE: Haiku (?) - by billy - 07-26-2013, 08:04 AM
RE: Senryu - by billy - 07-26-2013, 01:02 PM
RE: Senryu - by Volaticus - 07-26-2013, 01:28 PM
RE: Senryu - by Wildcard - 07-26-2013, 03:07 PM
RE: Senryu - by Volaticus - 07-27-2013, 07:29 AM
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