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Senryu

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07-26-2013, 03:15 AM

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Glistening skin,
trembling body
heatstroke.

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Glistening skin,
trembling body -
heatstroke.

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Senryu - by Volaticus - 07-26-2013, 03:15 AM

RE: Haiku (?) - by rowens - 07-26-2013, 03:17 AM

RE: Haiku/Senryu - by Volaticus - 07-26-2013, 09:34 AM

RE: Haiku (?) - by Magpie - 07-26-2013, 07:33 AM

RE: Haiku (?) - by billy - 07-26-2013, 08:04 AM

RE: Senryu - by billy - 07-26-2013, 01:02 PM

RE: Senryu - by Volaticus - 07-26-2013, 01:28 PM

RE: Senryu - by Wildcard - 07-26-2013, 03:07 PM

RE: Senryu - by Volaticus - 07-27-2013, 07:29 AM

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