haiku 24-07-13

[Magpie]

butterflies
gathering,
at the crossroads

yeah, though i was more thinking

butterflies gather
crossroads

though it changes the thing completely

or

butterflies gather
above crossroads
no directions

Hi Billy, I've dropped the crossroads and done an edit trying to salvage what I could, there was a reason I was using the word crossroads, but it's not really part of my everyday vocabulary so it seemed to sit uncomfortably as an image. Thanks for your thoughts on it..