haiku 24-07-13

[Magpie]

not bad,

i wonder what the rules are on using just two lines?

Cheers. I checked about 2 lines and it does happen but very rarely mostly in translation from japanese to english. There's also 1 & 4 line haikus, it's a fucking nightmare sometimes even 3 lines.

I presume by 2 lines you read "butterflies gathering" as one, which I see where your coming from.
It's fictitious which is unusual for my haiku, it's always stuff I've seen, so it didn't feel right in some ways, if that makes sense. Just trying different stuff