Family Outings

[Magpie]

These images are really vivid and strong and work well together. Also it works on so many different levels depending on how it's read. When I first read it yesterday it felt like a very sad poem.
I like the aspect of three points of view based around the same situation, it's a bit like the film Mystery Train which if you haven't seen, makes my comment seem a little strange.
Thanks I enjoyed reading it.
Mark.