07-23-2013, 07:33 AM
(07-23-2013, 07:29 AM)rayheinrich Wrote: a 'ku with one view is quite rightA Haiku? I said I won't do it!
when it's two juxtaposed it's delight!
poems weighted with blubber
they chew like old rubber
if they're light they endow us with flight
"Oriental Mystique?" I see through it.
"profound" chopped up words
about trees, rocks and birds
pick any 10 words and "haiku it"

