07-22-2013, 06:33 AM
(07-22-2013, 06:02 AM)Volaticus Wrote:Hi Louise,(07-21-2013, 07:13 PM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: many timesHi AR,
fly asks window
same question -
each reply
is solid
I must admit that I don't know much about tanka. But that aside, I love your poem. The last two lines I thought was humorously clever and made me laugh. I've got no critique to offer, I love your poem just as it is. Very sharp.
Best,
Louise
Thank you, I can't ask for better than people to say don't edit. In fact I think it may be the first time that's happened. In all honesty I could've helped the fly to find the open window but I needed my poem first. Thanks again.
Mark
wae aye man ye radgie