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Tanka 21st July
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07-22-2013, 06:02 AM
(07-21-2013, 07:13 PM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: many timesHi AR, I must admit that I don't know much about tanka. But that aside, I love your poem. The last two lines I thought was humorously clever and made me laugh. I've got no critique to offer, I love your poem just as it is. Very sharp. Best, Louise |
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Tanka 21st July - by Magpie - 07-21-2013, 07:13 PM
RE: Tanka 21st July - by cidermaid - 07-21-2013, 11:47 PM
RE: Tanka 21st July - by Magpie - 07-22-2013, 02:08 AM
RE: Tanka 21st July - by Volaticus - 07-22-2013, 06:02 AM
RE: Tanka 21st July - by Magpie - 07-22-2013, 06:33 AM
RE: Tanka 21st July - by billy - 07-23-2013, 10:15 AM
RE: Tanka 21st July - by Magpie - 07-24-2013, 07:15 AM
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