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[Heartafire]

Something about a hurting heart, A hurting heart
an angry heart, a sad soul an angry soul
always brings the words words surface
to the surface
flowing onto the page flowing with ease
with such ease and fluidity that
when things brighten up again, would drop "again"

I am dry.

Hi Carrie, I like this very much, but I find nothing unique about it.
I think you might want to try expanding on it. I am a junkie for short poetry but I like it to draw me into something exciting. I have added some input, unfortunately it is not exciting either. Enjoyed this though, that is always a good sign.
My best
Heart