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(07-18-2013, 03:17 PM)cidermaid Wrote:  Hi Billy
I liked the symmetry of this one. It felt well balanced if that is a valid term.
I have sat looking at this and re-reading it for a couple of minuites, it has an innocence and simplicity on the surface that gave me a nice picture of summer abundance harvested and ejoyed in the autumn glut, but then because it was you writing I'm afraid i then went looking for other applications.... And quickly saw one.
Something along the lines of A lovely pair, on a mature lady - ripe for picking. Fruity extras Big Grin!

(I never used to think like this ...I have been corrupted or is that just re-educated Hysterical)

Either read i liked this and did not have any nits.

Yes, I liked as well.
But you! First the fire hydrant, now this: "lovely pair, on a mature lady
- ripe for picking. Fruity extras". BTW, you forgot to imply what
exactly one does with a fruit dessert...

(Unprotected sexual innuendo begats sexual innuendo.)

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.... - by billy - 07-18-2013, 02:51 PM
RE: .... - by cidermaid - 07-18-2013, 03:17 PM
RE: .... - by rayheinrich - 07-20-2013, 02:35 AM
RE: .... - by billy - 07-18-2013, 03:25 PM
RE: .... - by Brownlie - 07-18-2013, 09:40 PM
RE: .... - by cidermaid - 07-20-2013, 05:25 AM
RE: .... - by rayheinrich - 07-20-2013, 05:36 AM
RE: .... - by Aish - 07-28-2013, 09:38 AM
RE: .... - by Volaticus - 07-28-2013, 10:09 AM
RE: .... - by billy - 07-28-2013, 10:13 AM



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