07-28-2013, 06:20 PM
Harvest on its back
Gentle, stubborn, silver grey -
nobler than a horse
Gentle, stubborn, silver grey -
nobler than a horse
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Man's best friend (haiku)
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07-29-2013, 01:56 AM
The personification of the harvest in L2 is brilliant; it really evokes a personality and is concise. L3 is also good; comparing a harvest to a horse in terms of nobleness is intriguing. Thank you for the read
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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