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Libertas
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07-19-2013, 09:40 PM
I agree with vistaldust, it would have a stronger impact if some of your emotions were put into the poem. Overall I really like it though, good read. I really felt engaged. My favorite line is "Many were burned and many were shot as we all unlearned the shit we were taught." It made me stop and think twice.
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Libertas - by carassiusauratus - 07-15-2013, 12:37 PM
RE: Libertas - by carassiusauratus - 07-15-2013, 02:37 PM
RE: Libertas - by cidermaid - 07-15-2013, 03:25 PM
RE: Libertas - by jdguyb - 07-16-2013, 12:09 AM
RE: Libertas - by carassiusauratus - 07-16-2013, 11:28 AM
RE: Libertas - by Vistaldust - 07-17-2013, 09:07 AM
RE: Libertas - by carassiusauratus - 07-17-2013, 12:40 PM
RE: Libertas - by Vistaldust - 07-18-2013, 10:41 PM
RE: Libertas - by billy - 07-24-2013, 12:34 PM
RE: Libertas - by TheWall0912 - 07-19-2013, 09:40 PM
RE: Libertas - by carassiusauratus - 07-21-2013, 12:42 PM
RE: Libertas - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-24-2013, 12:52 PM
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