07-18-2013, 11:39 PM
ireland4scots, thanks a lot! I was trying to make it intense, suspenseful, whatever you want to call it.
billy, thanks for the criticism. I guess I don't normally think of cliches when I am writing but I can see why my work would be more powerful without them. I'll try to work on that.
billy, thanks for the criticism. I guess I don't normally think of cliches when I am writing but I can see why my work would be more powerful without them. I'll try to work on that.