07-18-2013, 03:17 PM
Hi Billy
I liked the symmetry of this one. It felt well balanced if that is a valid term.
I have sat looking at this and re-reading it for a couple of minuites, it has an innocence and simplicity on the surface that gave me a nice picture of summer abundance harvested and ejoyed in the autumn glut, but then because it was you writing I'm afraid i then went looking for other applications.... And quickly saw one.
Something along the lines of A lovely pair, on a mature lady - ripe for picking. Fruity extras
!
(I never used to think like this ...I have been corrupted or is that just re-educated
)
Either read i liked this and did not have any nits.
I liked the symmetry of this one. It felt well balanced if that is a valid term.
I have sat looking at this and re-reading it for a couple of minuites, it has an innocence and simplicity on the surface that gave me a nice picture of summer abundance harvested and ejoyed in the autumn glut, but then because it was you writing I'm afraid i then went looking for other applications.... And quickly saw one.
Something along the lines of A lovely pair, on a mature lady - ripe for picking. Fruity extras
!(I never used to think like this ...I have been corrupted or is that just re-educated
)Either read i liked this and did not have any nits.