old painting

old painting

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07-18-2013, 08:30 AM

(07-16-2013, 12:56 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:

old painting
spring looks into
the look of you

or another that's quite different:

spring photograph
you
looking into summer

maybe trying replacing the second you and another synonym for the poems subject.
Awesome poem. hits close to home!

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old painting - by rayheinrich - 07-16-2013, 12:56 PM

RE: old painting - by cidermaid - 07-16-2013, 05:54 PM

RE: old painting - by rayheinrich - 07-16-2013, 05:57 PM

RE: old painting - by newsclippings - 07-16-2013, 07:21 PM

RE: old painting - by cidermaid - 07-17-2013, 05:34 PM

RE: old painting - by Leanne - 07-18-2013, 04:31 AM

RE: old painting - by popeye - 07-18-2013, 08:18 AM

RE: old painting - by Bunx - 07-18-2013, 08:30 AM

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