Falling (another villanelle attempt)
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Falling (another villanelle attempt)
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07-17-2013, 02:14 PM
I really like the overall feel of the piece. It makes me long for my New England home in the Autumn. The last stanza brings it home nicely, connecting our fate with the fate of the leaves. I was also pleased by the imagery of the church steps. I guess the first line is a bit cliche, but it works.
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Falling (another villanelle attempt) - by Brownlie - 07-17-2013, 02:30 AM
RE: Leaves of Autumn (another villanelle attempt) - by heslopian - 07-17-2013, 09:22 AM
RE: Leaves of Autumn (another villanelle attempt) - by billy - 07-17-2013, 09:43 AM
RE: Leaves of Autumn (another villanelle attempt) - by Brownlie - 07-17-2013, 10:07 AM
RE: Leaves of Autumn (another villanelle attempt) - by billy - 07-17-2013, 10:12 AM
RE: Leaves of Autumn (another villanelle attempt) - by Brownlie - 07-17-2013, 09:28 PM
RE: Leaves of Autumn (another villanelle attempt) - by gdimonaco - 07-17-2013, 02:14 PM
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