07-16-2013, 05:54 PM
Agree with Billy spring cannot look into. Someone could perhaps look like spring (as in fresh and new).
which one of the above was the one you originally posted? (just interested to apply comments to right poem)
But I like the idea of your image which made me think ofthe following: The image of the eyes of love looking at an older person and seeing new and fresh beauty there.(sort of rearranged it in my mind I guess> Appoligies for taking the liberty)
The look of you
spring looks in
old painting.
which one of the above was the one you originally posted? (just interested to apply comments to right poem)
But I like the idea of your image which made me think ofthe following: The image of the eyes of love looking at an older person and seeing new and fresh beauty there.(sort of rearranged it in my mind I guess> Appoligies for taking the liberty)
The look of you
spring looks in
old painting.