07-16-2013, 02:08 PM
(07-16-2013, 01:10 PM)billy Wrote: a clever one, it fits all the criteria as far as i can tell of a haiku
the look of spring being the painting.
it also makes the you part of the picture as well.
nicely done.
Except I screwed up; I typed it in backwards.
I have corrected it and added a second one I liked
as well.
Lotta damn combinations are possible:
old painting
spring returns
the look of you
old painting
you look into
the look of spring
photograph of spring
you
looking into summer
all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?