07-16-2013, 02:08 PM
(07-16-2013, 01:10 PM)billy Wrote: a clever one, it fits all the criteria as far as i can tell of a haiku
the look of spring being the painting.
it also makes the you part of the picture as well.
nicely done.
Except I screwed up; I typed it in backwards.
I have corrected it and added a second one I liked
as well.
Lotta damn combinations are possible:
old painting
spring returns
the look of you
old painting
you look into
the look of spring
photograph of spring
you
looking into summer
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions