07-12-2013, 10:23 PM
Hi Volaticus,
I love the title with the first two lines, i feel that this has a form of spirituality about it. But I have to confess that the last line has me a bit confused. I cannot make the "through air waves" work in a visual way with the ocean. I think my main problem is actually with the oceans divide...I think of different / seperate oceans as merging. It could just be me being on the wrong wavelength here. I'll be interested to see any other comments or your own thoughts.
Thanks for the read AJ.
I love the title with the first two lines, i feel that this has a form of spirituality about it. But I have to confess that the last line has me a bit confused. I cannot make the "through air waves" work in a visual way with the ocean. I think my main problem is actually with the oceans divide...I think of different / seperate oceans as merging. It could just be me being on the wrong wavelength here. I'll be interested to see any other comments or your own thoughts.
Thanks for the read AJ.