LETS WRITE A POEM ABOUT,
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Bunx, on my second read and I'm loving this one. I will be back to give it some more reads tommorow and hope to have some crit to offer you.
Quick question S4 is Mom mom intentional? (it could well be, it works but just checking because it keeps making me pause to think on it)
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LETS WRITE A POEM ABOUT, - by Bunx - 07-12-2013, 03:11 AM
RE: LETS WRITE A POEM ABOUT, - by cidermaid - 07-12-2013, 05:44 AM
RE: LETS WRITE A POEM ABOUT, - by Bunx - 07-12-2013, 11:54 AM
RE: LETS WRITE A POEM ABOUT, - by Bunx - 07-16-2013, 02:59 AM
RE: LETS WRITE A POEM ABOUT, - by Bunx - 07-16-2013, 04:37 AM
RE: LETS WRITE A POEM ABOUT, - by Bunx - 07-17-2013, 04:05 AM
RE: LETS WRITE A POEM ABOUT, - by heslopian - 07-29-2013, 02:23 AM
RE: LETS WRITE A POEM ABOUT, - by Bunx - 08-02-2013, 02:55 AM



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