Shitty Villanelle

[Vistaldust]

Brownie, you just gave me an education on what a villanelle is. I looked up the definition, then pieced it to your poem. It seems like a pretty tough gig to nail down. Kudos for effort! I like the idea of the bugle signifying man's need to kill, destroy, rule. In fact, is there any room for a line that links the bugle sound directly to a military event as well? That might enhance the use of the bugle as a simple sounding instrument that we use to annoint so much devastation.

Thanks for the read and suggestions. I suggest looking at
The Villanelle "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night" It can be found here. http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/5796

Dylan Thomas. I'm a fan of talented alcoholics!!! Thanks.