07-05-2013, 04:29 AM
No, this is not shitty! Though it is not "go gentle" either. I like this very much, I am not confident enough to say how close you have come in your effort to compose a villanelle. I may have written a villanelle without knowing it...;-) I must research. Kudos on your fine poem.
My best,
Heart
My best,
Heart

