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Shitty Villanelle
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07-04-2013, 07:17 AM
(07-04-2013, 07:05 AM)milo Wrote: we do actually have a practice thread for villanelles. First things first - your 2 refrains. The first has an inversion, the second a grammar error and neither has the meter right. Fix those first, then move on. (Also, get rid of shrilly)Ay, thank you. Get rid of shrilly rofl. |
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Shitty Villanelle - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 06:19 AM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by milo - 07-04-2013, 07:05 AM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 07:17 AM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by billy - 07-04-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 10:06 PM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by tectak - 07-05-2013, 12:49 AM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Vistaldust - 07-05-2013, 01:18 AM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Brownlie - 07-05-2013, 03:00 AM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by milo - 07-05-2013, 04:07 AM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Vistaldust - 07-05-2013, 05:06 AM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Heartafire - 07-05-2013, 04:29 AM
RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Brownlie - 07-05-2013, 06:03 AM
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