07-04-2013, 07:17 AM
(07-04-2013, 07:05 AM)milo Wrote: we do actually have a practice thread for villanelles. First things first - your 2 refrains. The first has an inversion, the second a grammar error and neither has the meter right. Fix those first, then move on. (Also, get rid of shrilly)Ay, thank you. Get rid of shrilly rofl.

