Shitty Villanelle

Shitty Villanelle

milo

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07-04-2013, 07:05 AM

we do actually have a practice thread for villanelles. First things first - your 2 refrains. The first has an inversion, the second a grammar error and neither has the meter right. Fix those first, then move on. (Also, get rid of shrilly)

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Shitty Villanelle - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 06:19 AM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by milo - 07-04-2013, 07:05 AM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 07:17 AM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by billy - 07-04-2013, 09:40 AM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 10:06 PM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by tectak - 07-05-2013, 12:49 AM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Vistaldust - 07-05-2013, 01:18 AM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Brownlie - 07-05-2013, 03:00 AM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by milo - 07-05-2013, 04:07 AM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Vistaldust - 07-05-2013, 05:06 AM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Heartafire - 07-05-2013, 04:29 AM

RE: Shitty Villanelle - by Brownlie - 07-05-2013, 06:03 AM

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