unusual syntax
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Stuck on the train so I wrote this it can be called practice

Concrete and dripping paint that's dried
Graffiti acts as salient stains amidst cement blurred grey by speed
The train emits a blaring horn and rumbles over tracks
The strangers sit and noise becomes cacauphony
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unusual syntax - by serge gurkski - 06-30-2013, 01:40 PM
RE: unusual syntax - by Vistaldust - 07-02-2013, 01:54 AM
RE: unusual syntax - by serge gurkski - 07-02-2013, 02:22 AM
RE: unusual syntax - by rayheinrich - 07-02-2013, 04:45 AM
RE: unusual syntax - by Brownlie - 07-02-2013, 06:14 AM
RE: unusual syntax - by milo - 07-02-2013, 06:15 AM
RE: unusual syntax - by Leanne - 07-02-2013, 06:24 AM
RE: unusual syntax - by milo - 07-02-2013, 06:24 AM
RE: unusual syntax - by Brownlie - 07-02-2013, 07:05 AM



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