07-01-2013, 04:30 AM
I really liked the imagery in this and the graceful way you have of putting words together. It was melancholy without being overly dramatic, which I enjoyed. My one question to you is about the use of the comma in the title, since it doesn't appear when the line is repeated later on. "silently, protest the stars" and "I silently protest the stars" seem to have very different meanings, which could be intentional or not. Either way, I enjoy your writing and hope to read more!