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silently, protest the stars
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06-29-2013, 05:30 AM
You have some nice lines in this (Their persistent tongues softly whither me away)I was hooked by its quirky opening and it conveys a sense of loss but I'm afraid some of the meaning was lost on me. but I did enjoy it. TOMH
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silently, protest the stars - by captaintigernelson - 06-19-2013, 11:24 AM
RE: silently, protest the stars - by Keith - 06-29-2013, 05:30 AM
RE: silently, protest the stars - by emmavee - 07-01-2013, 04:30 AM
RE: silently, protest the stars - by newsclippings - 07-01-2013, 04:42 AM
RE: silently, protest the stars - by serge gurkski - 07-01-2013, 05:43 AM
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