Watching Out edit 1 milo

[R.C. KITCHENS]

Dress crushed upon the floor. Wine stained. Stained.
Shoes apart by a full bed length. One heel broken. Broken.
Door to bathroom trail of bottles, tubes, potions, pills. Some crushed.
Lipstick smeared greedily around bursting, baby lips. Baby.
Leg dangling, arm dangling, hair swept by awkward winds. Breathing.
Young breasts like uncared for kittens that will stay out all night. Lights out.
Asleep but still plugged in to mp3. Pink wired ears, buzzing. Asleep.
4 a.m. Home. Safe. Seventeen. Safe.

tectak
2013

I see the stamping as a reinforcement word. It works, It is a little repetitive though. Good imagery and set piece. I like the "worrying" it implies.