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[R.C. KITCHENS]

A summer breeze drifts through the soft wavy hair of the Angel that looks into my eyes. She stares. The deep trance penetrates my heart like an arrow. I feel as though im being carried to the sky on clouds.I learn forward with nervousness.the glisten from her wet lips intrigues me closer. I feel the warmth of her breath on my lips.I close my eyes and move closer and closer, then...nothing.I open my eyes. She is gone.

I took a second to space out your poem and feel it reads better.

A summer breeze drifts through the soft wavy hair
of the Angel that looks into my eyes.
She stares.
The deep trance penetrates my heart like an arrow.
I feel as though im being carried to the sky on clouds.
I learn forward with nervousness.
the glisten from her wet lips intrigues me closer.
I feel the warmth of her breath on my lips.
I close my eyes and move closer and closer,
then...nothing.
I open my eyes.
She is gone.

"penetrates my heart like an arrow" seems cliche to me. so does "carried to the sky on clouds" I also think "bring's" is more suitable than "intrigues". I think you could just say "I close my eyes and move closer" then... nothing.

Its proper etiquette to provide poetry critique before posting your own poetry. If you get a chance review some poems and leave feedback. Welcome.
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