A Fish's Ascension
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I may have misinformed myself and thought that fish had more than one ventricle. I guess I could change it to: "My pumping ventricles is wished to be clogged by an Octopus, whose absorbent grungy tentacles'. Other than that, I don't see how that line doesn't make sense tbh.
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A Fish's Ascension - by Dru Flores - 06-24-2013, 09:51 AM
RE: A FIsh's Ascension - by rowens - 06-26-2013, 02:03 AM
RE: A FIsh's Ascension - by Zerric - 06-26-2013, 03:33 AM
RE: A FIsh's Ascension - by Dru Flores - 06-26-2013, 04:02 AM



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