Northern Stillness
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This was pretty good man, I liked the rhyme scheme and rhythm in this. I agree with the one poster that "well" could be removed and the reader would still get the same affect. Nevertheless, this was a solid post. Keep dropping.
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Northern Stillness - by Wjames - 06-23-2013, 12:55 AM
RE: Northern Stillness - by Russnature - 06-23-2013, 06:38 AM
RE: Northern Stillness - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-23-2013, 10:21 AM
RE: Northern Stillness - by Keith - 06-24-2013, 08:31 AM
RE: Northern Stillness - by Dru Flores - 06-24-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: Northern Stillness - by heslopian - 06-25-2013, 04:37 AM



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