Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al

[Brownlie]

This will most likely be more of a commentary than a critique.

Play the violin again; -- I think you should mention Flesch in the first line so it is clear that the poem is about him.
let hands that flit so lightly
slip a sigh. - I would use a better verb than "slip"
Fold forward into flesch -Capitalize proper nouns.
and scoop the ecstasy;
sweep low to bow
to music’s tempting ways.
Your tender notes will soothe the strings,
I rise on softly wafting wings
in air so thin, bells scarcely ring, - Thin air is tangible I think more details like that would help draw out the feeling.
but there I hear the sky.

Tectak
1992

This poem seems ambiguous to me, but many things obvious to some are ambiguous to me.