Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al

[tectak]

Play the violin again; <<< ok, you got the semi in. Cute!
let hands that flit so lightly
slip a sigh. <<< it's good but ... well, nuttin.
Fold forward into flesch << i see no obvious reason for double space. You will know why it is needed here.
and scoop the ecstasy; << scoop? Not easy. the violonist scoops the ecstasy of whom? Her's, the auditory's?
sweep low to bow <<< double space, see above.
to music’s tempting ways.<<< slightly cliché ("tempting ways". Come on. ;-) )
Your tender notes will soothe the strings, <<< tender and soothe! Ouch!
I rise on softly wafting wings << I am mild: tender - soothe -- softly ... ;-)
in air so thin, bells scarcely ring, <<< Nope! Sorry, Friend. ;-)
but there I hear the sky. <<< good!

Tectak
1992 <<< ecce poeta! ;-)

all in all: finely exphrastic*.
cheers
serge, man's drunken thinker


oh: F-lesch: big BIG F, no? ;-) Keep on rockin.

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* was tempted to write: ex-phrastic, but let's not overdo the Greek.

pps.: let's hands that flit so lightly is superbious.

Perceptive and sergically precise but any double spaces are accidents. I do not see them but if you do you may remove them in your copy which, no doubt, you will keep in your wallet, close to your heart.
I do appreciate you comments on the somewhat "chocolate box" sentiments expressed latterly in the piece but would excuse myself on genre-genuine grounds.
"scoops the ecstasy" is a little precious. It was contemporaneous consideration; if you were not there you could not see it...my fault. I did not do a good enough job of eulogising.
Physics. If air is thin enough (vaccuum) sound is not transmitted.The silence of space. The higher you go, the thinner the air. As air thins, sound diminishes. End.
Best and thanks,
tectak