06-20-2013, 03:19 PM
hi bunx.
is xxx a substitute for a name? should it be [sight] on the 2nd line?
it feels quite hard to follow and i'm struggling to take something from the poem.
the 1st line of the poem works okay though i'm not sure how
wish i could be more constructive
is xxx a substitute for a name? should it be [sight] on the 2nd line?
it feels quite hard to follow and i'm struggling to take something from the poem.
the 1st line of the poem works okay though i'm not sure how
wish i could be more constructive