06-20-2013, 03:35 AM
Is this inspired by the recent events of NSA leak by Snowden? I can't offer much of a critique, but from what I have learned in the last few days at PigPen, this sounds more like a commentary. Very nicely worded and definitely very robust in its structure, but the idea lacks the originality of expression, to me it sounds no different from what many of the protesters have been saying on the streets in Washington D.C.
Again, I am no expert so its possible I may have failed to see the poetic techniques and deftness. No offense.
Again, I am no expert so its possible I may have failed to see the poetic techniques and deftness. No offense.