Between Night and Day
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i liked this poem a lot. it reminds me of being awake in bed early in the morning, mind wandering. i liked the day/night cricket/bird image of being intertwined but separated. nice work.
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Between Night and Day - by autumnleaves - 06-08-2013, 05:23 PM
RE: Between Night and Day - by thislimeismine - 06-08-2013, 08:37 PM
RE: Between Night and Day - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-09-2013, 02:21 PM
RE: Between Night and Day - by heisenborg - 06-10-2013, 05:01 AM
RE: Between Night and Day - by YaMarVa - 06-11-2013, 09:17 PM
RE: Between Night and Day - by NikkiRHCOG - 06-15-2013, 02:49 AM
RE: Between Night and Day - by c.gutzwiller - 06-15-2013, 09:24 AM
RE: Between Night and Day - by MissKiss - 06-16-2013, 05:46 PM



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