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Between Night and Day

Between Night and Day
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06-15-2013, 09:24 AM
I like the idea of each sound being unaware of the others. It seems to project your loneliness onto your surroundings and emphasizes to me how oblivious of the sounds you become again at the end with "my mind returns to you"
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Between Night and Day - by autumnleaves - 06-08-2013, 05:23 PM
RE: Between Night and Day - by thislimeismine - 06-08-2013, 08:37 PM
RE: Between Night and Day - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-09-2013, 02:21 PM
RE: Between Night and Day - by heisenborg - 06-10-2013, 05:01 AM
RE: Between Night and Day - by YaMarVa - 06-11-2013, 09:17 PM
RE: Between Night and Day - by NikkiRHCOG - 06-15-2013, 02:49 AM
RE: Between Night and Day - by c.gutzwiller - 06-15-2013, 09:24 AM
RE: Between Night and Day - by MissKiss - 06-16-2013, 05:46 PM



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