06-05-2013, 09:41 AM
Hi,
I like this poem, and I certainly enjoyed the theme and style. Only thing is, I think that some of the rhymes detracts from the poem, ie. "just like a hat" seem somewhat awkward.
Thanks for the read.
I like this poem, and I certainly enjoyed the theme and style. Only thing is, I think that some of the rhymes detracts from the poem, ie. "just like a hat" seem somewhat awkward.
Thanks for the read.