06-04-2013, 11:45 PM
Run through it, capitalise the start of sentences, correct that 'I'm' that you've left there 
If anything I'd take some commas out. Take this sentence:
I just promoted, the dopest of movements.
And then: I just promoted the dopest of movements.
Without the comma the sentence makes more sense - so I'd take it out. Look at your sentences separately, if they make sense great, if they don't then adjust until they do.
If anything I'd take some commas out. Take this sentence:
I just promoted, the dopest of movements.
And then: I just promoted the dopest of movements.
Without the comma the sentence makes more sense - so I'd take it out. Look at your sentences separately, if they make sense great, if they don't then adjust until they do.
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)