The Hideout Lounge.
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yes thanks alot Ms Rainbow. meter and grammar have been hard for me to get a grasp on in poetry. as well as how it is read with said punctuation. would you suggest using more commas?
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The Hideout Lounge. - by Bunx - 05-26-2013, 02:59 AM
RE: The Hideout Lounge. - by Brownlie - 05-26-2013, 06:24 AM
RE: The Hideout Lounge. - by Bunx - 06-04-2013, 04:55 AM
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RE: The Hideout Lounge. - by Bunx - 06-04-2013, 10:35 PM
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