Sleep

[Keith]

Everyone’s an artist, got me in good opener
snug inside their sheets. a bit weak
Awakened by our sleeping minds,
subconscious finds its feet. nice

Dancing like a plastic bag great line
caught in a gust of wind, I knew this already as the bag was dancing
expanding like a child’s balloon
unfolding from within.

Fragmented dreams
when you were young,
still linger to this day.true

Inside the mind
grand paintings hung, nice image
forgotten smiles you’ve saved. good end made me wistful

I enjoyed your poem and the way you approached dreaming would like to see some more edgy lines to balance out the wistful ending. TOMH