06-04-2013, 04:46 AM
Snow in general I find is often written about - the purity of snow tends to tie in with that so I suppose you could say both.
I had a think about the ending and I think it's because it's less graceful than the rest of the poem. I'm not sure. It doesn't fit in for me. It's not a bad ending, but I'm sure someone could suggest other things that would add to it
I had a think about the ending and I think it's because it's less graceful than the rest of the poem. I'm not sure. It doesn't fit in for me. It's not a bad ending, but I'm sure someone could suggest other things that would add to it
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)