06-03-2013, 06:11 AM
(06-03-2013, 01:09 AM)Bunx Wrote: Hey,I would consider why you break your lines at certain points and what you achieve with basic rhymes. I suppose I have your back.
Does one have my back?
Before the beat attacks?
This slack, I always refrain.
Makes my poems second for
a week and a day.
Anyways I'm back piggies.
So lets get wiggly

