It is beauty that we share

[FayandFire]

I give you the flower (gave you?)
So turn off the light
Do not be scared, it has special power
The power so bright - This line seemed predictable

I give you the flower (gave?)
A beautiful one;
So do not look so sour-
It is not your darkest hour

It is within the flower
A magnificent power
It is within the flower: heaven's fruit
A glourious beaut' - glorious was spelled wrong ( you may have noticed, thanks to spell check I did)

Please keep my flower
My Dear

I'm new to this so bear with me!
Your poem leaves me itching for more imagery / explanation. I agree with you sometimes simple words are best for expressing yourself but I think its easy to get to simple. I like the last two lines.