05-27-2013, 12:43 AM
(05-26-2013, 01:56 PM)tadaki Wrote: I'm back and trying again with something new hahaWhat is this about? I would avoid rhyming that sounds forced. Maybe checking out some poetry on youtube would help you out. There are also audio tracks you can listen to on this website.
I'll have a day where I'm all alone
Writing to some indie tune.
A day of cliches and artsy escapades
Where the irony of life shines through.
Of cookies and cream
And brown cakes on white plates;
Of chocolate and strawberry all funnily shaped,
To pierce with a fork and spoon.
Yea I'm gonna head down to some cafes
And try a glass of chai tea latte
And have myself one of those sunny little days
Where I just don't care about shit.
Too wordy? Too much tell and too little show? Tell me what u guys think haha)


