05-26-2013, 01:56 PM
I'm back and trying again with something new haha 
I'll have a day where I'm all alone
Writing to some indie tune.
A day of cliches and artsy escapades
Where the irony of life shines through.
Of cookies and cream
And brown cakes on white plates;
Of chocolate and strawberry all funnily shaped,
To pierce with a fork and spoon.
Yea I'm gonna head down to some cafes
And try a glass of chai tea latte
And have myself one of those sunny little days
Where I just don't care about shit.
Too wordy? Too much tell and too little show? Tell me what u guys think haha)
I'll have a day where I'm all alone
Writing to some indie tune.
A day of cliches and artsy escapades
Where the irony of life shines through.
Of cookies and cream
And brown cakes on white plates;
Of chocolate and strawberry all funnily shaped,
To pierce with a fork and spoon.
Yea I'm gonna head down to some cafes
And try a glass of chai tea latte
And have myself one of those sunny little days
Where I just don't care about shit.
Too wordy? Too much tell and too little show? Tell me what u guys think haha
)