Delusion of a siren

[rowens]

I want to think about this for a while, and read it some more. The problems I was talking about was how you have punctuation in some places but not others. Sometimes you end sentences with periods, sometimes you don't. You use heavy punctuation: commas, semicolons and periods in some parts of the poem. Then you don't use very much, so it seems inconsistent. Especially comparing the first stanza to the third and fifth. I don't mean the "Delusion of love" line, if you count that as the first stanza.

I sometimes like to start each of my lines with a capital letter, but that depends on certain things. I know that when you type on one of those auto-correct things, they make the lines begin with capital letters; what do you prefer? To leave them that way?