05-26-2013, 08:15 AM
I read this twice, and it was better the second time. A few punctuation details may have been a little off; if you haven't sorted them out by the time I'm back, I can look into that stuff further.
The first time I read it, I read the last line:
It’s another faculty that destroys sensory data into meaning.
I liked that, but that's not what it says.
I like it anyway. And'll see what happens whan I get back.
The first time I read it, I read the last line:
It’s another faculty that destroys sensory data into meaning.
I liked that, but that's not what it says.
I like it anyway. And'll see what happens whan I get back.
