Delusion of a siren
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I read this twice, and it was better the second time. A few punctuation details may have been a little off; if you haven't sorted them out by the time I'm back, I can look into that stuff further.

The first time I read it, I read the last line:

It’s another faculty that destroys sensory data into meaning.

I liked that, but that's not what it says.

I like it anyway. And'll see what happens whan I get back.
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Delusion of a siren - by Brownlie - 05-26-2013, 06:46 AM
RE: Delusion of a siren - by rowens - 05-26-2013, 08:15 AM
RE: Delusion of a siren - by Brownlie - 05-26-2013, 08:36 AM
RE: Delusion of a siren - by rowens - 05-26-2013, 10:39 AM
RE: Delusion of a siren - by Magpie - 05-26-2013, 12:33 PM
RE: Delusion of a siren - by Brownlie - 05-26-2013, 12:45 PM



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